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Gary Morris's avatar

I like your poetry in general, Jose, but this one may be my favorite. The sense of encouraging the reader (or the object of your words) is intimate and loving and very true to life. The repetitions add to it. Great work.

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Jose Muro's avatar

Thank you Gary : )

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Becoming the Rainbow's avatar

Another beautiful poem. Keep walking, chifoson.

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